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gsbentertainment   (0%)   v s   (100%)  slodda
        Battle ID:  431524 Type:   Text
        Voting Deadline:  Nov 8, 2009 Length:  16 Lines
        League:  Royal Supremacy
 

first things first what kind of name is SLODDA' SILLY AS NIGA nickname be ROGER. you aint for GOLD MIC so bitch why BOTHER how you diss WYLEOUT with a name like SLODDA. im a GUCCI ass niga you more like PRADA o BABY BACK BITCH stop sucking the BOTTLE. str8 G'z over here' i would have DECLINED this CHALLENGE please send my CONDOLENCES out to yo FAMILY. im that niga like STEWIE you that bitch like LEWIS and you slodda str8 dick like yo name was LOONEY. you a FONEY ass niga with alot of that BIG TALK dont have me OUTLINE yo fagot ass in WHITE CHALK. who ever judged that last battle between WYLEOUT and BIG MOUF talkn bout (slodda got it) yall some bitches in slodda mouf. fuck a wipe me down we WIPE OUT in the DIRTYSOUTH. have you floating down the JAMES like you was a PUT-BACK TROUT.

and for the record im that niga in RED. so gone tawk yo shit so i can fill you up wit LEAD. stay coming in with BARS like i was workn for the FEDS. better yet i be your DAD because i slaughter every FAG. and you be my fuckn DAUGHTER so bye bye MiZZES. Slodda.


dont you ever tryn come off on my niga again' and o yea i took a peek at a couple of yo friends. i found TWO BITCHES called the the sloddering twins so tell'em hit me up G-$quad we getn it IN.
-VS-

SLodda -----

message from gsbentertainment: yea you dissed my niga wyleout now its time for you to get yours dnt bitch out neither .... hes mad cuz im winning against his boyfriend SMH!



GSBENTERTAINMENT!? can get dropped on the PAVEMENT like his boy who looks like a CAVEMEN(wyleout)! yous a weak rapper dont come at me GULLY cuz i wont hesitate to lift the pump to ya TUMMY! my swagg is on HEAVEY kill you with the eagle im STEADY im READY to drop this clown on the ground like CONFEDY! your gay you straight fag and you KNOW-IT you aint gangsta, in jail a dude wips out his dick and you HOLD-IT! dont be stupid and jump in to the FIRE cuz ill be "quick" to pull this "clip" and burn u out like a TIRE! you never hugging NO-BLOCKS you be banging NO-GLOCKS yous a "bitch" you straight "snitch" when it comes to the COPS ill steal youll girl and ya car so go an KICK ROCKS!(lol) always on my GRIND so you know im hard to FIND leave this nigga pissed like he got a 1,000 doller FINE! trust me ill "blast" a "fast" PUMP ill leave you broken like "glass" just "ask" the last CHUMP! you worthless you trash you belong to a DUMP the only time he has balls to confrunt me is when hes DRUNK!! fuck a battle ill SLaughter you in a BRAWL keep punching your face till your knocked out ya DRAWS!! fuck it i just keep coming for MORE i bring weapons to my army like we down for a WAR! ill treat you like a "bitch"(dog) and get you a BONE you wont be known to be "rich" if it was engraved in ya STONE!! (tomb stone)



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DarkPhysikz  
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Nov 8, 2009 9:34 PM
 
i voted slodda only b-cuz he was a little better i mean jus a smidgen slodda the same thing to you long bars and no structure will not get you far especially on gm both o you guys need to go browse old battles like G-SUS vs Warplay is a good one or any Problem Text...Triple Six battles etc and pay attention to the formats and deliverys to fully understand how to text battle ...or do audios 

Souf-Paw
2009

I Spit-Acid-On-Tha-Tracks, laced wit Hazardous-Attacks....n Facts-That-Cut--n Blast-Tha-Wacks like my tounges An-Axe-Wit-Guns-Attached..... 


DarkPhysikz  
Voted for: slodda

Nov 8, 2009 9:31 PM
 
ok Gsb imma breakdown you 1st ....
your flow and structure could be way better with that being said lemme show you somthing
the key to a solid setup ina battle is multi multi punch like this
what kinda Name Is Slodda? who dont merk' 'Silly Ass Dude'...my Game Is Hotta 'you dont burn' like a Philly Wrapped Loose' multi multi punch get it? if not pm and ill go into it deeper, moving on next dont make yor bars so long to where ty cant be followed properly cuz wat makes sense to you might not to others 

Souf-Paw
2009

I Spit-Acid-On-Tha-Tracks, laced wit Hazardous-Attacks....n Facts-That-Cut--n Blast-Tha-Wacks like my tounges An-Axe-Wit-Guns-Attached..... 


MC Youngboy  
Voted for: slodda

Nov 8, 2009 2:39 PM
 
Aight both came very basic/simple with they rhyme schemes..both need improvement and seen a lot of played out concepts but anyway..

Flow: slodda
Mutlis: slodda
Personals: tie
Punches: slodda
Creativity: slodda
Originality: slodda
Metas: slodda
Wordplay: slodda (barely any from either)

Words of advice to entertainment..only CAP the words that rhyme

Good luck 2 both

MC Youngboy AKA MC YB AKA MC Young Muchachoe AKA Mikecool

www.myspace.com/mcyb24 


The_Multi_Man  
Voted for: slodda

Nov 7, 2009 3:05 PM
 
one had the better multies, punches and metaphors period. both could use work on building up punches and complexity as a whole. bless. 

This SHITS-INSANE!, "Lifes a Bitch!" the SCRIPTS-CONTAINED the truth... And you guys just "Fucked Your Life!" because the BITCH-HAD-AIDS!// 


Special Brew  
Voted for: slodda

Nov 5, 2009 3:21 PM
 
this was a basic battle....seen better from slodda but gsb was too basic so in my opinion slodda won. 1 thing they both need to work on and so do i at time is the syllables that they rhyme (gsb got an example of that in first line of his shit).... need alittle work but good shit overall.


i liked this line from slodda...

my swagg is on HEAVEY kill you with the eagle im STEADY im READY to drop this clown on the ground like CONFEDY! 

SeNd ThE cHaLlEnGe'S bItChEs!!
AcCePtInG aLl TeXt BaTtLe'S!!

~Special Brew~ 



 
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