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Alcoholic Author   (100%)   v s   (0%)  Special Brew
        Battle ID:  431491 Type:   Text
        Voting Deadline:  Nov 8, 2009 Length:  16 Lines
        League:  Royal Supremacy
 

Well its that time again... he said his verse is posted... so I wrote something real quick..

My mentality is like "FUCK WHOSE NEXT," author will read between there lines & CUT THROUGH TEXT cuz my rhymes are like the "latest technology" they "UP TO SPEC" so quit cryin like a baby when I aint TOUCH YOU YET! Its evident that your irrelevant & SUCK DUDE.. YEP - What I'm INKING IT ASTOUNDS your bars are a result of what primitive THINKIN IS ALOUD... So you can SINK UNTIL YOU DROWN but the "closest you'll get to alcoholic" is BINGING WITH YOUR PALS. Plus your always WHINGING WHEN YOUR DOWN no-one found it FASCINATIN THE DAY YOU LEFT not a TRACK HES MAKING WILL PLAY ON DECKS I guess your a "product of your environment" the way your SATURATIN THE GAME TO DEATH. Your not CAPTIVATING THE SAME RESPECT & my PUNS BEEN DEFINED RAW my words to the voters there can only be
ONE KING, DECIDE YOURS but I aint talkin postal when I say "special delivery" isn't SOMETHING I'D SIGN FOR. You'll sucCUMB IN A RHYME WAR, no-one will be MISSIN YOU SURELY when I "play it by ear & gunz" like I LISTEN TO COREY & "take brew at home" like I'm SIPPIN A 40. Get "fucked properly" like I'm DIPPIN A SHORTY you can seek REFUGE TAKING CRACK NOW cuz your lyrics could be on the "small print of a harvard scholarship"... & still not come from an 'EDUCATED BACKGROUND'.

He's from new york, peeps keep sayin hip hop is dead, namely from there, hence the product of your environment, you should get the rest.
-VS-

Expos:
AA = Alcohol Awareness.
SUPERSONIC = Basketball Team (seattle supersonics) that were Green.
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i get green like a SUPERSONIC about to turn you off like ELECTRONIC, yo mom should have killed you when you were EMBRYONIC cuz you came fucked up like on GIN AND TONIC. thanks for no profile picture due to your fetal alcohol SYNDROME cause that would of made it extremly easy to WIN ONE, please get behind the wheel and BE DONE cause your full of hot air like AIR GUN!

!Lets go!

i aint never bite but IM A MAN EATER (no homo) CALL THE DAMN PREACHER, BREWS THE MAIN FEATURE watch as i AIM, RELEASE, DELETE YA!!!!! he didnt get hit on the head BUT CATCHES "AMNESIA" (hah) CAUSE BREW BEAT YA, CALL THE PREACHER and have the GOOD LORD MEET YA !! understand im STRAPPED LIKE A CARSEAT this no competition no need TO RECHARGE LIKE RC (cars), KIDS ON EMPTY LIKE HI-C (drinks) so im ready to DO LAPS LIKE A SWIM MEET. call me the BLACK FIST im causing FOREHEAD STITCH, when i knock down all WACK DISS im gonna put you through pain like whats in yo A-A-PAMPHLET!!

(aint alcohol but i do do roids , and i dont need no AA programs fucking quitter...so here we go bitch)

i pump STEROIDS AND SUPPLEMENTS to bump up my frame quick, as he will bitch bout L's (loses) and try to AVOID PUNISHMENTS. ill DUMB IT DOWN QUICK so this retart can UNDERSTAND SPITS, you accomplished nothing and will lose when its BATTLE OF WITS. so im gonna stun this nigga like he on SHROOMS AND X, then look past as i see WHOS UP NEXT cause its a fAcT ill SLAY EM WIT TEXT.you stepped in the wrong JURISDICTION now meet your fate ACTUAL EVICTION....i hope after this battle there is REAL FRICTION cause im exposing what gOldMiC WONT BE MISSING!!!!

~Special Brew~
DarkPhysikz  
Comment Only

Nov 8, 2009 9:38 PM
 
Special Brew your lines were good dont get me wrong but you had more then a few offsets like:
STEROIDS AND SUPPLEMENTS
AVOID PUNISHMENTS...it just seemed way forced i mean the punchlines werked for the most part but dont cap the werd if it doesnt matchup it fucks up te reader cuz wut were seein an anticipating are two diff things.... 

Souf-Paw
2009

I Spit-Acid-On-Tha-Tracks, laced wit Hazardous-Attacks....n Facts-That-Cut--n Blast-Tha-Wacks like my tounges An-Axe-Wit-Guns-Attached..... 


DarkPhysikz  
Voted for: Alcoholic Author

Nov 8, 2009 9:36 PM
 
im going with AA on this basically bcuz his multis and punches hit harder and matched better there were a few that had offsets but overall i enjoyed it fav line:I'm DIPPIN A SHORTY you can seek REFUGE TAKING CRACK NOW cuz your lyrics could be on the "small print of a harvard scholarship"... & still not come from an 'EDUCATED BACKGROUND'. 

Souf-Paw
2009

I Spit-Acid-On-Tha-Tracks, laced wit Hazardous-Attacks....n Facts-That-Cut--n Blast-Tha-Wacks like my tounges An-Axe-Wit-Guns-Attached..... 


MC Youngboy  
Voted for: Alcoholic Author

Nov 8, 2009 3:13 PM
 
Basically AA outskilled Brew..
I like Brew's style cause its always original, the 1st part of ur verse was nice and was probably the only personals in the whole battle but it seems u don't always match up ur mutlis gud and da syllables in ya multis don't always rhyme,,AA had more nameplay than Brew tho Brew was nice with his but da "special delivery" was 1 of the most clever lines in the battle (couldve been set up better tho)

Flow - AA
Personals - Brew
Multis - AA
Punches - AA
(Both couldve set em up better)
Creativity - AA
Metas - neither really stood out
Originality - Brew
Humor - Brew
Nameplay/Wordplay - AA

Good battle..no h8..stay up 

MC Youngboy AKA MC YB AKA MC Young Muchachoe AKA Mikecool

www.myspace.com/mcyb24 


The_Multi_Man  
Voted for: Alcoholic Author

Nov 4, 2009 7:09 PM
 
damn. punches got this for me.

What I'm INKING IT ASTOUNDS your bars are a result of what primitive THINKIN IS ALOUD... So you can SINK UNTIL YOU DROWN but the "closest you'll get to alcoholic" is BINGING WITH YOUR PALS.

crazy as fuck. both came hot. but AA came way more complex and had harder hitting punches. bless! 

This SHITS-INSANE!, "Lifes a Bitch!" the SCRIPTS-CONTAINED the truth... And you guys just "Fucked Your Life!" because the BITCH-HAD-AIDS!// 


RsEaVeY95  
Voted for: Alcoholic Author

Nov 4, 2009 6:13 AM
 
took it easy IMO, better punch's and multi's
Get "fucked properly" like I'm DIPPIN A SHORTY you can seek REFUGE TAKING CRACK NOW cuz your lyrics could be on the "small print of a harvard scholarship"... & still not come from an 'EDUCATED BACKGROUND'.
haha that was nice. 

Your-Donned-A-Vest-Hurt-N-Slayed, wait is that Kanye's-Head?-West-Bursting-On-Stage saying Today-Redz-Had-The-Best-Verse-In-Ages!/I'm Spotting-Vets-Who's-Doubting, Rips-Affecting-Residents and Knocking-Heads-Off-The-Mountain, like i'm Disrespecting-Presidents!/ 


DjShOrtbLuEberrY  
Comment Only

Nov 4, 2009 12:49 AM
 
Nice battle guys...I cant drop a vote cuz me an Brew is crew... 

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