thanks for the battle man 

fuck...i tried o prove myself and beat a premium...i guess he was too good...u earned mah respect....ight l8z 

FLow:TIE
Multi's: Notorize (better set ups, made more sence)
Punches: Notorize (HAnds down)
Personals: None
WOrdplay/nameplay: Notorize
Creativeity/complexity: Notorize (Easy)

Aite, in this battle, you can tell note is the more experienced battler...Nice shit homie, punches and wordplay hitting like crazy!

My favs...

Got punches SURROUNDIN-YA-MOUTH My team is like "eviction", put you "OUTA-YA-HOUSE" and I don't need personals to CLOWN-YA-ACCOUNT// Yea, I'm throwin "Barbara Cilli" punches that'll put you "DOWN-FOR-THE-COUNT"!!

^^^LMAO...crea tive, nice shit

You play it fair in the beginning, but DICKIN-THE-BACK-NINE it's a GIVEN-YA-WACK-RHYMES aint even SHIT,-IT-AINT-HALF-MINE// Forget recyclin concepts AND the "minimize button"...I'll put ya "CLIQUE-ON-A-FLAT-LINE"!!

^^^Haha, seen the concept before, but flipped nciely

think we don't know you been banned, we know this SUCKA-SO-WELL, PLUS-YA-KNOW-HELL now that I FUCKED-YA-VOTES,-WELL...// Yea, a coupe-is-great but you's-a-fake and now everyone'll see "Super 8"...FUCK-A-MOTEL

^^Nice nameplay, goood way to end it....

Balla, you have a real nice flow, but it seems like you try to stay on the SAME multi scheme for too long, which REALLY takes the chances of you having a nic epunch away, and most ya multi's are filler...

This ADDICTION-OF-MINE! is CONFLICTING-YA-RHYMES! have em' confused and losing AMBITION-EACH-TIME! they ~SPITTING--A-LINE~! Im the king of this jungle without ~GRIPPING-A-VINE~!

^^^THat really says NOTHING....but what's sad is that it went on for another 4 lines like that, saying nothing, which pretty much killed you

ALl in all, Balla really was just rhyming words the whole time, and note was throwing punches galore....

Really sums it up perfectly...

PEace 

MIZERDER..

You play it fair in the beginning, but DICKIN-THE-BACK-NINE it's a GIVEN-YA-WACK-RHYMES aint even SHIT,-IT-AINT-HALF-MINE// Forget recyclin concepts AND the "minimize button"...I'll put ya "CLIQUE-ON-A-FLAT-LINE"!!
How you gonna STEP-TA-NAMES like Notorize when ya TEXT-IS-LAME...I'm NEXT-TA-BLAZE this wack cat, I mean I'll FLEX-YA-FRAME// I rip-through-kids and faggot if-you-win, then "baller rides" like an "ESCALADE"!!
Should I do it QUICKLY?-WELL-THE-ANSWER-IS... 

Um, yeah....

Be back to vote later 

alright straight up notorize ryhme skeem is crafted way better..



punchies - Notorize
muilts - Notorize
flow - Notorize
wordplay - Notorize
nameplay - Notorize



this was an eazy win... a lose like this will help u...theres lots of room for improvement but make it happend then rematch..but until then...







Vote - Notorize





Nice Battle..












Lojik. .. 

thanks for the breakdown champ 

Lol, It Posted Twice, My Bad.. 

Ok, Overall, Note Took This, Im Not Going To Comment On Where I Think You Can Improve Note Cuz Like You Said, This Was A Key, Super, I Think A Lot Of Your Verse Coulda Been Removed And Reaplaced With Something Different, You Have Tha Basic Idea But It Got A Little Boring And Repitive At Times. Note Came With Better Punches, More Creativity, Flips Off Your Name, While You Didnt Mention His Name Once, Or Even Attempt Namelay, Thats Where You Wanna Try Improving, Peace.

Goodluck To Both. 

Sorry, Shit Froze Up On Me..

Mr Super..

Each 'bar' is like a "PAIR-of-CLASSiCS" they'll stomp this [CLOWN] if he DARE-To-BASH-SCRiPTS//
Your 'recycled' rhymes always "TEAR-LiKE-PLASTICS, I'll stuff em' in [GROUND] and SPARE-THE-CASKETS//

^Ok, I See The Ideas, Trying To Throw In Some Small Punches On The Way To A Haymaker, Little Bit Like Not Only Not Quite As Effective, Not With This Bar Atleast.

[YOU] CATCH-FAST-SPITS, that SLASH-WRISTS, when my verses leave the gates they 'breakout' so watch for a devolping RASH-QUICK
[YOU] ETCH-TRASH-HITS, that aint GASH-SHIT, my attacks make 'lighting strike twice' so you get your ASS-KICKED in half a FLASH-DICK

^Same Again Really, Carrying The Scheme Over, Its Ok But Multies Were Pretty Basic, Dick, Quick, Etc, Maybe If They Were A Little More Advanced Then They Would Stand Out More, You Got Tha Basic Principles For Concepts And Punches Too.

This ADDICTION-OF-MINE! is CONFLICTING-YA-RHYMES! have em' confused and losing AMBITION-EACH-TIME! they ~SPITTING--A-LINE~! Im the king of this jungle without ~GRIPPING-A-VINE~!

^Multies More Advanced Tho Didnt Quite Match, Not Too Me Anyway, Punch Wasnt Hard Hitting, Not For Note Anyways, Simply Because It Wasnt Aimed At Him.

contusions to ya verabrate have you "lean back" and SHITTING-OUT-SPINE!! I stay pistol WHIPPING-YA-KIND! throwing BRICKS-AT-YA-MIND, ya easy to "beat off" like masturbation while checking out porn FLICKS-IN-LINE!

^Punch Was Weak, The Filler Is Getting A Bit Too Much Now.

"Create gaxalies" with "celestial power" leave you with no choice but to think that this PRICK-WAS-DEVINE! Imprints of this loss STICK-TO-YA-MIND cause you love "my dawgy style" faggot like DICK-FROM-BEHIND!!

^This Was Better, Punch Made Me Laugh A Little, 

Mr Super..

Each 'bar' is like a "PAIR-of-CLASSiCS" they'll stomp this [CLOWN] if he DARE-To-BASH-SCRiPTS//
Your 'recycled' rhymes always "TEAR-LiKE-PLASTICS, I'll stuff em' in [GROUND] and SPARE-THE-CASKETS//

^Ok, I See The Ideas, Trying To Throw In Some Small Punches On The Way To A Haymaker, Little Bit Like Not Only Not Quite As Effective, Not With This Bar Atleast.

[YOU] CATCH-FAST-SPITS, that SLASH-WRISTS, when my verses leave the gates they 'breakout' so watch for a devolping RASH-QUICK
[YOU] ETCH-TRASH-HITS, that aint GASH-SHIT, my attacks make 'lighting strike twice' so you get your ASS-KICKED in half a FLASH-DICK

^Same Again Really, Carrying The Scheme Over, Its Ok But Multies Were Pretty Basic, Dick, Quick, Etc, Maybe If They Were A Little More Advanced Then They Would Stand Out More, You Got Tha Basic Principles For Concepts And Punches Too.

This ADDICTION-OF-MINE! is CONFLICTING-YA-RHYMES! have em' confused and losing AMBITION-EACH-TIME! they ~SPITTING--A-LINE~! Im the king of this jungle without ~GRIPPING-A-VINE~!

^Multies More Advanced Tho Didnt Quite Match, Not Too Me Anyway, Punch Wasnt Hard Hitting, Not For Note Anyways, Simply Because It Wasnt Aimed At Him.

contusions to ya verabrate have you "lean back" and SHITTING-OUT-SPINE!! I stay pistol WHIPPING-YA-KIND! throwing BRICKS-AT-YA-MIND, ya easy to "beat off" like masturbation while checking out porn FLICKS-IN-LINE!

^Punch Was Weak, The Filler Is Getting A Bit Too Much Now.

"Create gaxalies" with "celestial power" leave you with no choice but to think that this PRICK-WAS-DEVINE! Imprints of this loss STICK-TO-YA-MIND cause you love "my dawgy style" faggot like DICK-FROM-BEHIND!!

^This Was Better, Punch Made Me Laugh A Little, 

Ok, First To Vote, Was Looking Forward To Sad Vs Note But Hey, Shit Happens..

So I won't BE-SURPRISED when ya KEY-RELIES on "Tabloid Punches" cuz all you SPEAK-IS-LIES// Now, this is ya SWEET-DEMISE cuz you and ya aliases could be "guide dogs for the blind"...but you aint "SEEIN-IZE"!!

^Nothing Too Hard, Solid Opener, Nice Flip Off Your Own Name, Tabloid Punches Was Nice Too. Kind Of A Little Jab To Start The Bar With, Flow, Multies All On Point.

Got punches SURROUNDIN-YA-MOUTH My team is like "eviction", put you "OUTA-YA-HOUSE" and I don't need personals to CLOWN-YA-ACCOUNT// Yea, I'm throwin "Barbara Cilli" punches that'll put you "DOWN-FOR-THE-COUNT"!!

^Rofl @ Down For Tha Count, That Was Nice, Simple But Hella Effective, Another Solid Bar, Moving On..

You play it fair in the beginning, but DICKIN-THE-BACK-NINE it's a GIVEN-YA-WACK-RHYMES aint even SHIT,-IT-AINT-HALF-MINE// Forget recyclin concepts AND the "minimize button"...I'll put ya "CLIQUE-ON-A-FLAT-LINE"!!

^Lol, Nice Idea Again, Personally Didnt Like This As Much As The Previous Two Bars But Cant Fault It, Solid As Usual.

How you gonna STEP-TA-NAMES like Notorize when ya TEXT-IS-LAME...I'm NEXT-TA-BLAZE this wack cat, I mean I'll FLEX-YA-FRAME// I rip-through-kids and faggot if-you-win, then "baller rides" like an "ESCALADE"!!

^Punch Decent, Quite Liked It, Buildup Was Ok, I Get Tha Feeling Ya Taking It A Lil Easy?

Should I do it QUICKLY?-WELL-THE-ANSWER-IS...it "Depends on if ya come SHITTY"-LIKE-A-"GRANDMA",-BITCH// But how can ya weak bars-test-me? You're living PROOF my verse "Sparks-NV" like the "CITY-IN-NEVADA"-PRICK!!

^Hmmz, Dunno What To Think About This One, Dont Dislike It, Dont Really Like It Either.

I'm the LAST-OF-MY-CLASS, you just a whore in drag so I'm BLASTIN-YA-ASS// The "Salsa in Cuba" is the only time we "HAVANA-DANCE"...wait...fuck that "MS" aint even "STANDIN-A-CHANCE"!!

^Lol, This Was Better, Liking This Alot More, Salsa Part Was Dope, Rest Was Solid..

You think we don't know you been banned, we know this SUCKA-SO-WELL, PLUS-YA-KNOW-HELL now that I FUCKED-YA-VOTES,-WELL...// Yea, a coupe-is-great but you's-a-fake and now everyone'll see "Super 8"...FUCK-A-MOTEL

^Yeah!! Good Finisher, One Of My Favourites From This Verse. Props.. 

WSUP...dis should be a good battle...ight l8z 

thanks for the battle